I have traveled from Seattle to our Maine summer home to divide up the family pictures and letters and get them out of here before the place burns down.
Definitely. Hopefully it has a sense of accumulating energy. I’m not rereading now, but I believe one of the paragraphs right at the end is a single, very long breathless sentence. If it’s not, then it should be. 🙏
My god this is heartbreaking. Your prose is so poetic in this chapter. It feels sung because of the repetition and structure. Was that deliberate?
Definitely. Hopefully it has a sense of accumulating energy. I’m not rereading now, but I believe one of the paragraphs right at the end is a single, very long breathless sentence. If it’s not, then it should be. 🙏