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Kimberly Warner's avatar

β€œI am as supple as a tiger cub in its mother’s mouth.” This sentence. This love.

Adam Nathan's avatar

πŸ… πŸ‘©β€πŸ‘¦ πŸ“– ❀️. If your eyes are as bad as mine, I want you to know that is a "tiger" "mom and son" "book" and "heart". I think it is a son, anyway. I've been practicing my emojis.

Kimberly Warner's avatar

I see a horse and a salt shaker.🀣 Funny you mention emojis. You commented yesterday somewhere about feeling like you were running Taylor Swift’s fan club. I was going to recommend you start using the art of the emoji. Guess you heard me!

Mr. Troy Ford's avatar

What a scene, Adam. And I don't mean Ali Baba's cave of treasures though I remember them well from my own childhood, esp. the trick of the thieves in the jars and the wife's boiling oil. But the scene on the bed with your mother, it's magical, and living on in this story.

Adam Nathan's avatar

I do hope so. Looking forward to 4:30 EST. πŸ˜€

Chloe Hope's avatar

I’m not sure that the power of story itself has ever been so perfectly expressed

The tenderness in the blank spaces here is dreamy and precious

Adam Nathan's avatar

Heard. Thank you, Chloe. β€οΈπŸ™

Toni Prehoda Kahler's avatar

"I look directly at my mother, and she looks directly at me."

I could only wish upon a star for a story-time like this as a child.

Your telling grabbed me up into a whirlwind of child-feelings from so very long ago: Scheherazade... oh! Ali Baba made me shiver with excitement and fear and took me places...but I traveled alone.

I have a copy of Arabian Knights that my father won in a high-school debate---now my treasure... but oh, back when I was 5... I wish, I wish, I wish...

Your treasure, that kind of magic with your mom...with you forever and ever.

Adam Nathan's avatar

Thank you, Toni. What a surprising and wonderful gift for a school debate. Words were clearly important in both of our households.

Helen Campbell's avatar

In my mind I am sitting on the bed in New Harbor reading your memory ..I always loved hearing Gail read aloud. Our friendship was tumultuous but the good memories rise more and more with time. Thank you for sharing your excellent writing.πŸ’•

Adam Nathan's avatar

❀️ It was tumultuous and she loved you dearly. She was a complicated cat. πŸ… πŸ˜€ There is a LOT of Maine coming here. You are ahead of everyone.

Troy Putney's avatar

This is perfect. Wow. I've never wanted to read a part 2 more...

Adam Nathan's avatar

I wrote this piece so that my children would understand my first family (and how it connects to them). There's a lot about where the love of writing comes from. Hopefully, that will resonate with so many of us here that are in the same trenches, each coming to this from their own path. Thanks for the deep compliment. πŸ™β€οΈ

Josephine Vraca's avatar

Wow, the way you weave between the stories seamlessly, carrying us along is just remarkable.

Kenneth Mills's avatar

So beautiful and evocation of your mother, of a β€œstorybook summit,” that so many of us yearn for. Here’s to more tales unspooling, more β€œvessels of cunning” and β€œstarlit treasure” along the path. Thank you.

Eleanor Anstruther's avatar

Beautiful

Adam Nathan's avatar

An honor. Thank you. πŸ™

Nathan Slake's avatar

Enchanting, Adam. I loved this.

"Geological pile of blankets" is a wondrous description.

Adam Nathan's avatar

Thank you, Nathan. πŸ™

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Adam Nathan's avatar

"We take the jet's tail out of the sky

And tie a box of tiger's eye

Come back Aladdin, come back please

Forgive, forgive the forty thieves."

(I had to hunt for it, but hunt I did.)

Who's the band? Beautiful lyrics.