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Christine Stephens Tretheway's avatar

"U.U." This character you've created in Reginald is just so sweet that he has a pet name for his sleepmobile... And then 'the yips snuck up on him'...endearing him to us...and now little Phineas...my heart can't take much more! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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“It was a parade of indignities , large and small.”

“The two of them: Reginald and Phineas. If I do them justice, you’ll end up liking them both and then some.” Yup, I’m with you, and a few pages from now I can envision the possibilities. Kind of like The Karate Kid, only Phineas may not have as much potential as Daniel, who didn’t have much. And Reginald is no Mr. Miyagi, but if the moral of the story pans out, then they will both be winners . Like Mr. Miyagi might say,

“Man who catch fly with chopstick, accomplish anything.” ( no I did not remember the quote, had to look it up, and yes, I am not ashamed to say that I recently watched The Karate Kid ,again).

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