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Clancy Steadwell's avatar

Not sure if I commented this on the second part but “What Cheer” is such a great town name.

Christine Stephens Tretheway's avatar

A little bit of nostalgia which makes me smile, and some genuine sorrow for the tale of Reg's circumstances....I'm following this story closely...I can't wait until next week!

Adam Nathan's avatar

Thank you for following! It’s a safe bet to believe in him! And… next week you’re about to meet one of my favorite characters ever. 👓

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

The way you handle future tense is so fun. Reminds me of “The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie.”

Kimberly Warner's avatar

“He said it’s all I got so many times you’d think it would start raining.” What a line.

And that cross-eyed, VW roof ritual, a detail that made me smile and reminisce. :)

Holly Starley's avatar

Love it, Adam. Poor Reg!