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Really enjoyed this story.

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Thanks, Robert. Lovely to read. I wrote it probably twenty years ago and shared it with one or two friends only, but I've been pleased with how it came out. I always imagined super simple Shel Silverstein drawings of birds spinning around telephone poles. Here I've made do with AI "watercolor" renderings, but I'll take 'em. Thanks for your comment.

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I haven't read Shel Silverstein since I was a child myself but, from what I remember, your story is quite a bit like his writing.

It's really good. It's a moebius strip story done simply and very well.

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