A postmortem account of Silver Water, Inc.'s breakthrough communication with sperm whales and the tragic events that transpired off the coast of Baja California Sur in August 2022...
The story kept building like a volcano , lava gurgling below. Waiting.
I held myself back from what I was compelled to do. Scroll down to the end to find out what happened to Eona and
why. Then start from the top. I know , would have been shameful. What does she have to ‘say’ about all of this? I am left hanging and totally invested.
Now that might be 12 too many fingers even for us laid back folk in Vt.
I do like the FUCK MUCK
slogan, it will keep people guessing. If you do design one , probably should put all that on the back so I won’t have people staring at my front too long, just saying.
I can only imagine the glee with which you wrote this. I can picture you saying to yourself, yeah, why the hell not, let's try this. If you ever do a voiceover, I hope the footnotes are included. (btw, the whale recording doesn't seem to play in the phone app, but it worked fine on my laptop)
This is WILD, Adam. I love all the layers and multimedia. The whale noises! You had me at the Moby Dick allusion, but I'm really curious where this all goes. Very postmodern and delightfully mind-twisting.
Oh dear... am I allowed to foresee what will happen here?
Can you imagine Muck inviting Logan for a dive and some of the trouble in the world resolves in one simple dip? God, this is making me so furious I am becoming cruel :/
The story kept building like a volcano , lava gurgling below. Waiting.
I held myself back from what I was compelled to do. Scroll down to the end to find out what happened to Eona and
why. Then start from the top. I know , would have been shameful. What does she have to ‘say’ about all of this? I am left hanging and totally invested.
( Yeah, fuck Muck, he sounds familiar)
I’ll be wearing my Fuck Muck tee-shirt for next week’s read.
Put my order in for one, xs in Whale blue please.
You know I do actually have a 100 Stories shirt! I’ve only had one made so far though. No whale. 😔
Now that might be 12 too many fingers even for us laid back folk in Vt.
I do like the FUCK MUCK
slogan, it will keep people guessing. If you do design one , probably should put all that on the back so I won’t have people staring at my front too long, just saying.
Maybe a whale logo on the front.
Fuck muck. 🖕🏻 🖕🏻🖕🏻 🖕🏻 🖕🏻🖕🏻 🖕🏻 🖕🏻🖕🏻 🖕🏻 🖕🏻🖕🏻 🖕🏻
^ I hope that reference is clear. 😬
"emoji turkey" haha
you have more footnotes than DFW (not a bad thing 😇)
It's getting to be DFW length, too. 😀 The similarity ends there. Sigh.
well think of it this way: less personal emotional swings ugh
YOU ARE TH EDEVL.
This is insane Adam. I’m equally baffled with your mad imagination and junkie-hooked on needing to know what happens next.
I can’t read the footnotes. It’s a serious problem, I know. I’ll try again tomorrow, I promise!
Ok ok, I read the footnotes. I had to relax and not fret about referencing back to the text/context (do people do that?) It was worth it:
Donny is quoted as saying “somebody has to get in the water first to take the picture of the first person getting into the water.” 😂
Btw: if you read in the app or a browser it is REALLY easy to flick back and forth. Just click on the footnote number in both places. Pro Tip 😝
Oh sweet lord. I just tried it—footnote aversion solved.
I should maybe put a note at the top. There’s some really important information casually dropped in there.
👏
Whaaaaaat?! I DID NOT INOW THIS. Derrrr.
The good news for readers of my work is you can’t do a footnote in a footnote. And I tried. 😆
Like I said, YOU ARE TH EDEVL.
♥️🐳
I can only imagine the glee with which you wrote this. I can picture you saying to yourself, yeah, why the hell not, let's try this. If you ever do a voiceover, I hope the footnotes are included. (btw, the whale recording doesn't seem to play in the phone app, but it worked fine on my laptop)
When I listen to myself read my work I definitely “feel something” and it isn’t what I’m going for.
Thank you, Julie.
This is WILD, Adam. I love all the layers and multimedia. The whale noises! You had me at the Moby Dick allusion, but I'm really curious where this all goes. Very postmodern and delightfully mind-twisting.
Thank you for sticking with it! I’m charging into the great silence on this one. 😭 But I think there’s going to be a real reward here. 🙏
Joe Logan and Muck, huh? 😏
Yes, Julie is right, I was unable to play recordings on Part ll. Had no problem playing Part l, both on my iPhone.
I see. I’m not sure what’s going on there. 🤔
Oh dear... am I allowed to foresee what will happen here?
Can you imagine Muck inviting Logan for a dive and some of the trouble in the world resolves in one simple dip? God, this is making me so furious I am becoming cruel :/