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It is a truly wonderful read. Emotionally charged as it all unfolds.

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Eona’s intelligence far surpasses .

The media, the uncanny similarities of what is happening right now . Headlining the wrong part of the story. Attracting all the wrong attention. The idiocy of humans, trying to communicate using language from the wrong species.

“There are a lot of whales in the ocean.”

And here comes the cages.

“…flirting with the idea of a soft boundary geofence.” Humans…

Here I am in part V. Your story has gone from an extremely detailed mystery, trying to fit the pieces of the puzzle together, to a much deeper, more ominous understanding.

This is exactly how I’m feeling right about now,

a “…mix of grief, rage and despair.”

I am stunned into silence Adam. This story , like the waters that surround it, is ever changing , ‘the seas are becoming rough and the storm is fast approaching.’ Where will you take me from here? ‘Silver waters’ , Eona ! Moby…Heart wrenching.

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